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  • From ANON - Mawgy on January 02, 2004
    Chapter 28

    Oh, poor Leggy, even years after he was almost raped by that guy whose name I can't remember, and thoughts of that night come back to him! I'm just glad Erestor is with him and not Elrond, or Leggy could have been in trouble. But, luckily, it is not the lord, but instead the kind and thoughful elf that only wants what is best for Leggy, even if he does not show it all the time.

    And, may I just say? This has got ot be one of the BEST sex scenes I have EVER read! Both in length and content. It's hot and full of poassion, yet sweet and most importantly, Leggy does not get harmed by it, well, except at the beginning when he realises he is using the knife to arouse Erestor, but that he more or less brought upon himself, rather than his lover hurt him.

    Luv Mawgy
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  • From ANON - Mawgy on January 02, 2004
    Chapter 27

    FINALLY! A little comfort from ElroNow,Now, was that REALLY hard, my Lord?

    "He comprehends more about those inanimate baubles than he does about any living being in his Realm!" Oh, poor Leggy, he's always been second best to his father, yet knowing his life is worth less than even the most smallest and invaluable of Thranduil's treasures must be too much to handle at times. No wonder he eventually has a breakdown. IN fact, I'm surprised he hasn't had one before.

    "I really see no reason for me to be uncomfortable in my own home," hehe! I bet Erestor becomes VERY uncomfortable, VERY soon with a naked Legolas sitting merely inches in front of him! *g*

    Luv Mawgy



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  • From ANON - Mawgy on January 02, 2004
    Chapter 26

    Ooooh, I there really is nothing sexually frightening about an Elf, is there? Hmmm, pity I couldn't have been one of the girls in the hut, still I at least have my imagination! :P

    Ooooh, what could Thranduil's vault possibly have to do with the Nazgul, I wonder? Only one way I'll find out... on to chapter 27.

    Luv Mawgy
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  • From ANON - Mawgy on January 02, 2004
    Chapter 25

    Oh, Radagast is EXACTLY how I always imagined him to be! It's so wonderful when the books and fanfiction come together like that to create the same character twice, yet have him be the same way in both yet reach the same conclusions of his personality independently.

    Oh, and that poor human vilaage, and how all the children came bounding up to Leggy the first moment they saw him, wonderful! Yet so sad at the same time for Leggy looked to see who was missing.

    "What sort of character did this elf think he possessed?"

    Well, Elrond, you've hardly been kind to him from the first moment you met Leggy, now have you? Of course he is going to question your character! Gee, even some Elves can't see past the end of their noses! Sheesh!

    Luv Mawgy


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  • From ANON - Mawgy on January 02, 2004
    Chapter 24

    Hmmm, you know, I think I rather like Leggy when he is drunk. Especially when he dropped his knife and picked it up again without knowing how it got onto the ground in the first place! Very good!

    Oooooh, Leggy has forced a Nazgul into battle, how very brave of him, or stupid. But still, quite courageous none-the-less.

    Hehe, poor Erestor, being tricked into confessing he was watching Leggy, though I hardly blame him. Leggy truly is a 'hard to resist temptation.'

    Luv Mawgy
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  • From ANON - Ash on January 02, 2004
    You're alive! I was getting worried. Happy New Year!!! Another excellent chapter, things are REALLY heating up.
    BTW, sorry I keep converting my reviews from one website to another, it's just easier this way. Anyway, write more soon!
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  • From ANON - giggle on January 02, 2004
    I hope you had a nice two week vacation. You certainly returned with a vengeance as far as your story goes. This was a fantastic chapter.

    Thranduil and his machinations. He could teach Machiavelli a thing or two about intrigue. I am glad he is hopelessly in love with Meril because I want him to lose everything when the time comes. Love, his new heir, his old heir, people's respect, all but his throne. I want him to remain king while knowing all around him despise him. Black hearted aren't I? It keeps me happy.

    The tirade he enj enjoying while he went to the star room and waited for the carpenter was enlightening. He has a very interesting take on Elrond and his goals. I don't recall Elrond being quite so greedy but I could be wrong. I thought he just wanted to know about the ring. I didn't think he wanted to take over Greenwood. Is this Thranduil's paranoia peeking through? But just because you are paranoid doesn't mean they are not out to get you.

    Elrond under the subtle influence of Vilya. Well Elrond was very nasty to Legolas and I would like to see Thranduil's and Elrond's b*tts kicked pretty seriously but I think maybe Thranduil is getting a little nutzoid here. Kind of a stream of consciousness of hate, revenge, ego, and power tripping.

    Thranduil is smart enough to know though that Sauron is after something. He just has no clue what. He is so busy trashing greedy Elrond and his lust for power and Galadriel and the kinslaying that he can't see the forest for the trees. Sorry I couldn't help that one. It just popped out. If the carpenter is right Thranduil is a kinslayer also to get his plan into action. What a louse, a wood louse. I am on a roll tonite.

    The king also feels plans being made, an unseen hand shifting the board and moves in the game. He probably doesn't like the idea of being out of control He has planned things and now he is uneasy because someone else may have been making plans also.

    I really liked the description of the room. You do description really good. The forest, this room, people's motives. Good stuff. The idea that the Greewood as a living witness of all that had befallen the Silvan elves was great. Orome the only one with a face because he was the one that cares for things of the wood.

    I thought Thranduil was a real knucklehead when he started ranting about religious matters being used to elevate Legolas. I loved the statement on a plot involving Legolas. My first thought was PWP, plot what plot. Tonite I am being really bad.

    Now the real payoff of the chapter. If he had paid attention to the Silvan's he so despises he could have had many heirs from other women. He would not have had to put up with Ninglorien. She refused him more children and that would have broken his bond with her in his people's eyes. What a laugh. And Legolas is a true wood elf. Does this mean that Ninglorien played the king false? I think it would haven ien in her best interests to make sure thegolegolas was indeed the king's son by blood not just law. Of course the carpenter wouldn't give the name but he did say there was a way to tell who the father actually was. Very interesting.

    Now for the piece de resistance of this little kerfluffle. Thranduil as much as admitted that he set this whole thing up. That no one would be able to prove it. That he was home scot free. We know that this is never going to work out in his favor because murder will out every time. Well in a good tale like this one it will.

    So now we have a cat set among the pigeons as far as Thranduil is concerned. This human shows up to let everyone know that some Noldo are running around the forest with Legolas. And Aragorn and Mithrandir are hot to confront both Thranduil and Elrond. I for one can't wait.

    I hope your two week vacation made you all frisky and wanting to get some serious writing time in. We just got six more inches of snow so I have lots of time to read. I will be waiting with bated breath. giggle

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  • From ANON - Jayla on January 01, 2004
    I can't wait until the next chapter. Your story is really picking up speed!! It has been very interesting and emotional from the start but your plot is getting sooooo good. I really have no clue where you are going to take this story, but I hope it ends well for Legolas. He has been through so much, I was kind of hoping that Thranduil was his real father, but I guess the King is pretty scummy. Please tell me that Maltahondo is not his father!!!! I can't believe he would use own own son like he did. Make up a whole new character, just not Maltahondo! Oh Well.... I will just have to wait and see what you have in store for us.
    Jayla
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on January 01, 2004
    What an absolutly fantstic chapter, i stayed up to read. you have really blown me away, this fic gets better and better. full of intrigue and belivavble origional characters and good characterisations of principles. i love this fic. by the way th for for your comment a few posts ago, i feel the same *blushes* thats so nice :). yep as you can guess finally got time to read and had a lot to read which was very nice. legolas is really really going through it. he deffinetly has more nobilite in one little toe than a hundred thrudy's.

    anyway hope you had a good xmas, i was in sweden and just got back recently, unfortunatly have nasty flu and then my uni examsrt ort on monday, meeepp!!!!

    anyway hope you are well and HAPPY NEW YEAR

    huggs
    louise
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  • From ANON - Mystkyten on December 16, 2003
    Wow, it had been a while since I read this. You have updated alot.

    I like the direction it is going, and I am glad that Lord Elrond is to be held acocuntable for what he did to Legolas. Poor little elf. Lord Elrond needs to be hung by his balls for what he has done. I don't know your feelings for a Legolas/Aragorn relationship, but I think Legolas needs someone that will love him for him and not all this other nonsense.

    One last thing: WHO'S THE DADDY?!

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  • From ANON - Steph on December 07, 2003
    I just read ch 37, and I absolutely loved it. I think more happened here than in any chapter of late. I love that Legolas has finally got Gandalf and Estel on his side, and I like how you made them aware of all that he has been through. I also love the last paragraph. Legolas is so miserable and hurt that he has seemed to use it as fuel for a determination to see an end to it all. I hope to see those who deserve it get their due soon. I would also love to see an entrance of Glorfindel. I'm curious as to how he would react to all of this. This has been an amazing read all the way, and I'm continually amazed with how creative you are. Thank you for sharing!
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  • From ANON - giggle on December 07, 2003
    Good. Legolas has decided to take a stand. I hope Elrond gets his b*tt kicked but good. I know we still have Thranduil's plot (if it was indeed his) revealed and taken care of. Also Elrond's fate and the two other elves who died in battle. Of course this may not have been L's fault so he may not have to work any more for this. He can concentrate on his beloved forest. I'm sure I have left out other things that need clarifying but I look forward to learning about them.

    Lots of anger and angst in this chapter.so tso two words I had to look up. I love when I learn new words.

    This is such a satisfying story. In a ry goy good story no one really wins or loses. We all, the characters and the readers, learn things about them/ourselves and life. Even if none of us will ever have to cope with Middle Earth we have to cope with our own lives. Seeing others deal with difficult situations, betrayal, anger, pain, makes us think through our responses to these self-same situations.

    I love this story. Thanks for the update. giggle
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  • From ANON - gwilith on December 07, 2003
    Poor, poor Legolas! Man, our beloved elf never gets a break, does he? *sniff*
    Another wonderful, emotionally intense chapter. I am so glad that Aragorn and Gandalf are sticking by Legolas thorugh this despite their close ties to Elrond. I doubt he could take another betrayal.

    One bit had me really worried, however; when Gandalf thought "When this day was done, the Legolas he knew would be no more."
    What Legolas has gone through must be incredibly eonalonally scarring, yet I hope it doesn't change him too much. I love the fierce and innocent warrior that you have created and I'm affraid of him losing that innocence and becoming jaded. If that happened, he really would be Legolas no longer, and not the elf that we love so much. Hopefully Gandalf beinbeing overly pessimistic in light of the recent revelations. I knoewt ift if anyone could bounce back, it's Legolas.

    Anyway, thank you for the chapter and I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Mawgy on December 02, 2003
    Thanks for the comments. But, don't worry, it won't just be the early chapters, I'm slowly getting round to all the others as well, it just takes time, something I am very short of at the moment. Which, also explains why there hasn't been anything added to my fic for ages, but don't worry, I have a bit done for the next chapter. I'll let you know when I get it done and posted. Though, I did add a chapter about 2 months ago, did you read that?

    Now, again, I will get round to the other chapters, it just may take me a while to catch up. I would ask you to stop posting just so I can get up to where you are, but I LOVE this fic WAY TOO MUCH to ask for somethign like that, s'll 'll just have to set aside an afternoon sometime soon and review everything.

    And, how could I not tell you had missed out some of one of your chapters? This story is WAY too addictive to read some, know there is still half a chapter out there somewhere and not ask to gain access to it.

    Thanks again for your comments,

    Luv Mawgy.
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  • From ANON - Calenharn Elflover on December 02, 2003
    Ah, yes, I am *still* sticking with the story, although I have not reviewed more than once (twice?). Though I confess that I had forgotten all about the mistranslation, and now I have to go paw through the various forums to figure out what that was all about!
    hav have to second those who have praised your action sequences; I thought that the spider killing rampage in this last chapter was especially good. Legolas in Blood Lust.... *shiver*

    You do an excellent job in emotions, too, come to think of it. The earlier almost-fading-Legolas chapters - very sad.

    Thank you for thanking the readers... it is nice to know that authors appreciate our comments. It is also beyond amazing that you are willto wto work in little tidbits into your story, in appreciation.... so, if I may request/suggest, consult your Sindarin ionaionary and you will know what to put in. *g*




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