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From ANON - louise_oblique on November 01, 2003
very cool and col cutting gandelf. legolas as brill as usual. sorry short review very ill will cold :(
thanks for cheering me up

louise
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From ANON - louise_oblique on November 01, 2003
very cool and col cutting gandelf. legolas as brill as usual. sorry short review very ill will cold :(
thanks for cheering me up

louise
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From ANON - funkycharms21 on October 26, 2003
absolutly beautiful!
i loved this chapter so much!
sorry for not reviewing the last few chapters! have been too busy to even get to the computer at all!
but after reading this chapter, i knew i had to atleast drop you a line!
this is by far one of the best stories i had ever had the pleasure of reading!
and this chapter is remarkable!
though i know Elrond is very jealous after seeing Legolas and Erestor, i still dont liim!
im!
i feel sorry for him, but sending that cloth with Legolas' blood is too much! does he really want him to die?
he is a healer, but it seems as though Erestor has done more healing to Legolas, than he did!
not to mention that he must be able to see that Legolas is very near thee ofe of his endurance, can he not?
i wish i already knew what would happen when Thranduil will get that cloth!
also loved the scene between Gandalf and Legolas, and i was sure that Thranduil is Legolas' father, i wonder whether that will in future make a diffrence between them?
also wondered whether Gandlaf will take Legolas to Fearfaron, it does seem the best place to take him to, now.
and i suppose we are a step closer to when Gandalf will reveal Elrond's name and identity to Legolas, cant wait!
also glad to see Aragorn! any romance between him and Legolas? or perhaps blosseming friendship?
i wonder what he will think of Elrond's behaviour?
well, i think i've talked too much! sorry!
loved it as usual! cant wait for another one, please?

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From ANON - Steph on October 25, 2003
Oh, I wasn't expecting to see Aragorn! This just geetteetter and better. Is that really possible? The twists and turns you take us all on is absolutely amazing. I would love to see Aragorn champion our wood elf! Thank you so much for this update!
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From ANON - Breach Cannon all must die! on October 25, 2003
Where is home for Legolas

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From ANON - Mawgy on October 25, 2003
Chapter 23 (slowly getting through them...)

Is Elrond so proud as to not notice someone being sympathetic to him!? Legolas was sorry it happened at all, not sorry that he felt bad for Elrond. But no, Elrond just had to be the bastard I've come to know him to be and use Legolas like a common whore! And, just to spite his best friend, he had to release himself into Leggy's mouth, Erestor's favourite place! Why can't they see how horrible the Half-Elf is being!? Just gang up on him and kill him! It would be so easy to say it was Orcs while in Mirkwood! Though, I suppose to do so would be to reduce themselves to Elrond's level, so maybe they shoudn't. Still, if I hated him before, I just loathe him now!

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - Mawgy on October 25, 2003
Chapter 22

I know it hurts, but it's good that Legolas finally realised the truth behind Malthen, it's for the best, and I'm so glad you put it in when you did, it fits so perfectly with current themese and issues.

And I'm glad there was some friendly/feeling stuff going on there with Elrond. After what they shared, there ought to be some kind of deeper understanding between them. And, it's good that Legolas found a similiarity between himself and Elrond, you know, just to have something in common. And it's nice that whereas all of Elrond's previous lovers have been in it just for the sex, it's strange that the one he has known for the shortest amount of time, hurt the most and will betray, is also the only one that seems to actually care about him, apart from Gil-Galad, anyway.

And the letter Fearfaron gave him is so sweet! Though I don't think I like Legolas seeing himself as being the replacement of Annaldir, though I suppose that is what he kind of is. Just sad, that's all. Seriously, this really is a heart-string pulling story, isn't it? Well, if nothing else, then you sure know how to play on people's emotions! I'll give you that!

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - Mawgy on October 25, 2003
Stuff forgotten to be mentioned from chapter 21

How could they go through Legolas' possessions!? It's not like he has many, why not just leave them alone!? Good on Erestor for not wanting to read the letter, at least one of them has some sense of righteousness. Pity Leggy's fallen for the wrong Elf!

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - Mawgy on October 25, 2003
Chapter 21

Just because all Legolas has known thus far is pain, does not mean that is all he wants to know! Erestor gets it, why can't Elrond? He is, after all, a healer!

Oh, and when Elrond joked that everyone wanted Legolas dead and Legolas reacted the way he did... my heart just broke for him. It's so sad that such a seemingly harmless comment can be so destructivhoughough, I guess there must be some truth to it if it causes Legolas to deny it so profusely.

I must admit it was rather cool that Erestor got some revenge with his Lord when shouting at him to go after Legolas. See, it's stuff like that, where one moment the scene is dark and serious and someone is hurting, the next another laughs for what is ultimately a stupid reason, that I was talking about before. You're writing style is so unique and the plot of the story keeps on swinging this way, then goes off in a totally different direction! It's great! It's no wonder I fell in love with this fic 20 chapters ago!!!!

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - Mawgy on October 25, 2003
Chapter 20

THAT BASTARD! (but, I'll come back to that).

Hehe, poor Erestor, all aland and lonely yet hearing his own name being called out in passion! It's the kind of stuff nightmares would be made of for the poor Imladrian. Though I thought the forest sharing the sight of Elrond and Legolas curled up within each other's arms was rather sweet. If only Erestor were part of the picture and it would be perfection!

Now, ... THAT BASTARD!!!! How can Elrond be so cruel as to condemn Legolas for an incident he had no hand in that occured years ago!? Sure the pain must still be there, but Elrond acts as if it happened yesterday. And, as you say in chapter 30, Legolas is sure to be thrown out of Tawar for this. Where will he go then? Surely Elrond will not take the poor Elfling in, especially considering Legolas beieves him to be Erestor and Elrond may be his father... Yes, let's not forget that particualr aspect to all of this. Sure incest can be fairly erotic, but in this case it's just wrong. Anyway, I'll talk more about that when I get to chapter 30.

Oh, i love your writing style. I don't know, there's just something in your expressiveness that gives it that little bit extra umph! (That may makes no sense, but trust me, I mean it as a compliment. I would never say anything that may make you stop posting this wonderful fic here).

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - Mawgy on October 25, 2003
Chapter 19

First off, thanks for posting the rest of chapter 30, I loved every moment of it. (pssst, I'll tell you that again when I get round to reviewing it).

You know, for a moment, I liked Elrond there, when he said he didn't want to hurt Legolas further. And my heart almost beld for Legolas when he revealed he did not want Elrond to reject him just because he had been mis-used in the past! It was so sweet and the half-elf was so considerate. Though, I thought him a little big-headed when he insinuated how big his arousal was. Sure, it may be true, but if it were me, it would be quite off-putting.

Poor Leggy, even when prepared, he still gets hurt... it's no way for a cute being such as him to live.

By the way, I like how even though Erestor is really Elrond, you still call him Erestor most of the time. Usually, in stories where someone is pretending to be someone else, authors refer to them by threalreal name, but when people speak their name, they say who the person ins pretending to be. And, if anything, I like your way of doing it just because no one else does. I like individualism, it's a good trait to have, I think.

Anyway, so loving this, especially that chapter, it was so hot and steamy, despite the hurt I know that is coming soon.

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - Mawgy on October 19, 2003
Chapter 18

Ok, well, I know this is an important chapter for more lies are told, Elrond and Leggy are now alone, Leggy being told he is beautiful and worthy of all sorts of suitors and what-not, yet, for some reason I don't have much to comment on. The angst in it is good and builds up to just the right amount of pressure for what is to come in the following chapter, but, until then, I really can't think of much to say.

Though, I might just mention, good on Leggy. For although he was abandonned by everyone who meant something to him (no matter how little), he still is not a traitor. I was actually kinda surprised by that, but also relieved. Don't know why, just was.

Luv Mawgy

P.S. Chapter 30, there's only a certain amount of space that each chapter allowed, and some (or most, don't know really), has been cut off. PLease fix it soon, I hate knowing there's more of this fic to read out there and not being able to get to it. I'd really appreciate it, thanks.
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From ANON - Mawgy on October 19, 2003
Chapter 17

AAAAAH! This is one of my favourite chapters of this fic! DOn't know why, but the thought of Erester secretly bringing Legolas to arousal and then Leggy touching himself... *sigh*... it's almost too good to be true. Oh, and the position Erester was in when Leggy woke up! One hand caressing his arousal, the other on the Prince's, don't ask me why, but it's SO erotic to think about it. I'd love it if it was me who woke up to such a situation! (As long as I forgot I never gave my consent to such a pairing). Pity Leggy did.

Oooooh, and Erester saying he was almost worth it and how he is now all Elrond's! BRILLIANT!

Sorry for not reviewing earlier, been busy with schoolwrk. Will try to do better, though that won't be for a few weeks yet.

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - louise_oblique on October 15, 2003
Fantastic :) loved the end. thank god no pain for legolas. keep up the good work. take care
louise
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From ANON - Breach Cannon all must die! on September 26, 2003
What will the Noldor do when/ if they find our the wraiths are after Legolas. Hope Thranduil doesn't find out
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