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By : narcolinde

From ANON - Steph on July 25, 2003
Uh...I'm speechless *grins*

First of all, I did not expect you to update yet again so quickly, so thanks for that. And secondly, the long wait for Legolas to find pleasure in consensual love making was well worth it. This is the best chapter yet, and I think it is due as much to the build up as to the actual hottness of the scene itself.

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From ANON - mirasaui on July 23, 2003
Enthralling story--Could not stop reading.

Mirasaui A.
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From ANON - Mainframe on July 20, 2003
Wow!

That was so cool!!!

I really love the chapters where Legolas is in the forest, you can practically feel the character revel in his preferred environment, and your descriptions are so thorough that I feel like I'm hovering somewhere just over Legolas' shoulder most of the time.
I love the fact that Legolas is still very much suffering with grief, it�s always lurking in the background and seems now have taken up permanent residence in the youth, only allowing him brief rest bite now and again�I know he�s strong but he is still so young in your story, how does he bare it?

I love the idea that trees can be corrupted by the shadow; it is something that I have never considered before, but makes sense when you stop and think about it, and after all they are as much alive as elves, men or Orc. Nice touch!

So Legolas� body is starting to fail him�and the wraiths know of him and are actively seeking him out for capture (now that sends iveriver down my spine), and the Orc�s have virtually cut him off from the city. *bits nails to the knuckle and perches on edge of seat*

Rusciphant!!! Bloody horny elf! What did he think Legolas� reaction to waking up with a complete strangers hand down his breeches would be?!!!

I loved this whole section, you painted such a picture of innocence and vulnerability in the fallen prince and played off the lusty deceitful Noldar elf he appeared even more ethereal. It was a very powerful piece of writing and incredibly erotic, and the tree swaying, trying to gentle him after the molestation was heart-warming. The only thing that has left a bit of apprehension in me at the end of the chapter was the communication between the two Noldar, what do they intend next? It was alarming to see how easily Herdir was able to overpower Legolas and very telling of his physical exhaustion.

�I vote he stays in the tree! The Noldar in you tale are not to be trusted, even Elrond!!!�

Having a real good time reading your fic, many thanks for another enticing chapter!

Jen

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From ANON - Vermillion on July 17, 2003
Thank you for the little bit of lighthearted banter between the two elves (they seem strangely familiar). They are very naughty. I hope Legolas gets to have a little fun with these two. He deserves it after everything he has been through. I guess we shall see.

You know how much I adore this story. Once again you have made me laugh and cry within the same chapter. Your vision of the feral Legolas is forever etched in my mind.
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From ANON - Capella on July 16, 2003
I'm enjoying this story ever so much and really looking forward to the next chapters. The pain in the earlier chapters was heart-rending, but I love the way that Legolas has found his strength in the forest and transcended all the terrible things that have happened to him. Great scenarios, excellent original characters, and lovely touch of humour coming in with the friendship of Elrond and Erestor. I very badly wanted Legolas to give in to his urges there in chapter 16! I hope it won't be too long...

Thanks for sharing this.

Capella.
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From ANON - Steph on July 16, 2003
It is amazing how you keep adding to this story at such a pace. I have been in love with your plot and characters since you posted the first chapter. This is easily one of the best stories I have come across. Thank you so much for sharing!

rs,
rs,
Steph
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From ANON - Mainframe on July 13, 2003
This story just keeps getting better and better!

Poor Legolas' taa tua turn for the worst and slowly but surly people are starting to question what took place twelve years ago, the fact that they are in such a patriarchal society says much.

I adore the characters you have created and Fearfaron above all others. He is a natural father figure and hitivativation and desire to protect the disgraced prince has had me in tears more than once (truly). I love the way his fatherly instincts have kicked in and are currently on overdrive, his character has changed much and these horrific events have enabled him to speak out against Maltahondo an even the king! Valar help him!

But more and more people seem to turn to the prince and I wonder if this sway will continue, and if so Thranduil may have a revolt on his hands in the not so distant future.

Maltahondo� fears come to light and it�s brilliant to see him squirm, everyone thinks him Legolas father�if only they knew is the keeper of a greater crime.

Meril is out to protect her own interests as she shreds the scrolls even though she too now has serious doubts about the princes guilt.

Elrond and Erestor seem despicable in their intentions, but then again they have not met Legolas, I think it would be impossible not to like him once meeting him. He it not a politically driven creature, but a defender of the forests and I shall look forward to that one unravelling.

I can hardly wait for the next part this is all so exciting!

Jen

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From ANON - spiffy on July 12, 2003
What an enjoyable piece of adult fiction you are creating! I hope you have posted it on multiple sites as it deserves to be widely read.
ave ave been a fan of the books, and especially of Tolkien's elves, for thirty years. I admire your ability to skillfully portray complex beings whose aggregate nature can manifest itself in displays of kindness or cruelty, wisdom or cunning, generousity or selfishness. They may be honest, simple, and beautiful in spirit, or scheming and black of heart. It is a treat to read such a highly literate yarn about them. I wish you would continue with your hard work on this complicated plot with its fascinating, multidimensional creatures. I issue a plea that you make it a very, very, very lengthy tale.
P.S. The real world is so often full of misery that I will ruefully admit to being partial to happy endings in my fiction. While I would never presume to dictate to an artist, I will continue to read and to hope that a beloved and triumphant Legolas will emerge as your story concludes.

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From ANON - Vermillion on July 12, 2003
Ooh, more intrigue. It is so nice to know that at least a few more people give a abo about poor Legolas. He has not been forsaken. Your OCs are so individual and interesting. They all have their own agendas and I am dying to know what they are. Meril is really disturbing me. Now I'll never know what the messages from the Queen were. It's nice to read about OCs that can ruffle my feathers. Most people write very boring OCs. Thank goodness you are not one of them. Please hurry with more.
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From ANON - K on July 03, 2003
Oh dear lord, I hope Legolas is neither of their son. Either way it would be truly yucky by my point of view, and traumatic should he find out. How did I miss 3 chapters!?... It's been a long, happy reading night. Oohh, this is getting even more intriguing if that's possible, and I'm really anticipating Elrond & Legolas meeting (confirmation, yay!). Throw him some more comfort, he's had such a sh@*$y life. Argh! I can't believe Malthen did that, "stunned" is right. (Chapter 11 was particularly intense, esp. the very ending).
I really needed the humor in Ch 13. Erestor is Hilarious, the scoundrel. I love it! ~chuckle~ "take this fallen prince", indeed. And this in light of his belief Elrond may be the father! Sigh, excellent detailed descriptions. I wanna go... I feel like I'm forgetting something, but i painted a pool today and my brains not functioning at its usual brilliance~ha. Eagerly awaiting more,
K
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From ANON - Vermillion on July 02, 2003
The political intrigue is very interesting. Poor Legolas seems embroiled in it even if he doesn't know it himself. It saddens me to think that Elrond may use Legolas as a pawn in this political game like everyone else seems wont to do. Have I told you how much I love this story? I have? Well, I'm telling you again, I love this story.
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From ANON - Lady of Legolas on July 01, 2003
Now that was interesting.Elrond was told that he could be Legolas' sire?Thank goodness for controlled flow.Anyway,I hope that Legolas will be eventuallynd bnd by Elrond so that he can start the healing process.
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From ANON - Vermillion on June 23, 2003
I'm so happy you've updated. This latest chapter, although erotic, is so laced with sadness. My heart is just breaking for Legolas and I'm so glad Fearfaron is there for him. This is a fantastic story and I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
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From ANON - js on June 21, 2003
beautiful and dreamy, like a legend.

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From ANON - blacknoise on June 18, 2003
This is utterly amazing! Please continue!
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