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Reviews for Feud

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  • From ANON - Shanna on April 19, 2005
    Hola Erobey. Tienes mucho talento para escribir, es un placer leer "Feud"...
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  • From sivan325 on April 13, 2005
    Poor Legolas...

    So what is wrong with Thranduil, could you explain it to me?

    I feel bad as your account on FF.net... this is feeling worst (Pardon on my english).

    I hope to find more chapters of this angsty story of yours.

    Thank you for writing it, and I hope to read more of it.

    Keep up the PERFECT work that you are doing with your fic, and tried to update asap... please?

    Love you, and always in my heart, as I keep calling to Leggy to come hope... to me... lol!

    Sivan
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  • From ANON - sarah on April 11, 2005
    A very powerful chapter. Very riveting! I love the way you are bringing all this together. I'll be excited to see more.
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  • From ANON - Morier on April 11, 2005
    I thought you told me you weren't posting the two chapters before the last one because you didn't want to leave us with a cliffhanger!... and then you left us with this one!
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  • From ANON - Shanna on April 09, 2005
    Hola. Ésta es una de las mejores historias que he leido. Es un relato maravilloso...
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  • From ANON - nimue on March 17, 2005
    Well, I just caught up with you...

    I don't know what to say really;
    I'm utterly flabbergasted by your extraordinary talent for tale-weaving and your sheer mastery of the english vocabulary. something I happen to be partial to.

    As said in my previous review, I'm a bit weary of WIPs, but this one was barbed and wouldn't let go, hehe. I hope you keep getting inspired as this story seems nowhere near finished, despite its present magnitude.

    One question, if you can spare the time. There is this one [or two?] chapters where Legolas 'delivers' Lindalcon to Lorien and stays put in a talan, courtesy of Rumil. This seems strangely out of synch with the timeline, as I'd situate such a course of events AFTER the ongoing Erebor retrial... [I caught up on the Sentinel, incl. ch. 99] Why was this course of events disclosed so early on?

    Thank you for sharing this wondrous work of fiction, I cherish it and will certainly reread it. Quite a few established authors [and I don't mean on the net] would do well to take a pointer or two by you...

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  • From ANON - nightbreeze on February 22, 2005
    perhaps he will only forget after Taglen came in
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  • From ANON - nightbreeze on February 22, 2005
    I thought of something, one reasone Thranduil might not want Legolas around Gwilwilith is because he does not seem capible of being able to say "no" to her
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  • From ANON - nimue on February 21, 2005
    Okay.
    I'll keep this brief.
    You must have heard it all before.

    I don't go for WIPs. But I took a sample, of 'Feud'.
    Sort of.
    Never stopped reading until chapter 18?!
    You messed up my weekend, author!

    Seriously though.
    I'm baffled.
    You have a fantastic descriptive narrative, Talespinner!
    I'm so hooked.
    I dread the moment I catch up with you...

    All the same, thank you for sharing your talent and inspiration.
    I happen to like darkfic very much and your slashy description are downright erotic.
    You don't confuse being graphic with a writing a technical manual.
    Also, your characters are well-defined and consistent.

    Did I mention I like this 'Feud' very much?
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  • From ANON - Shanna on February 20, 2005
    Wonderful. Written exceptionally well...
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  • From ANON - Belty on February 20, 2005
    OMG! OMG! Ah, No, eek... Poor Legolas... Just out of interest, but what have you been feeding this plot bunny of yours? It's amazing... But when is Celeborn going to turn up? Or someone from the past... It will just be TOO awful if he forgets Legolas. *sobs uncontrolably*
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  • From ANON - Jasmine on February 20, 2005
    Noooooooooooooo! Grrrr, cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!! Or else I'll see if I can gather a mob together and toss you in an enchanted river!! And forbit Leggy to catch you in a death-defying display of acrobatics that would otherwise be waaaaaaaay cool!!! Darn, then again, I imagine the memory loss due to river-exposure would rather slow the updating process further.... please strike my aforementioned threat....... Hehe.
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  • From ANON - Tenar McAaron on February 19, 2005

    Well worth the wait!
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  • From ANON - night breeze on February 14, 2005
    defantely looking foward to the next instarment of Feud
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  • From ANON - Jasmine on February 11, 2005
    Thank you Thank you Thank you!!!!!!!!! :) That was absolutely what I needed!!
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