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  • From ANON - cesca on November 28, 2004
    Thank you again for your story. You are better than any therapy session out there.
    Cesca
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  • From ANON - Kryspen on November 27, 2004
    erobey!

    Your psychological drama/angst is some of the BEST out there. The conversations back and forth between the twins and their father were delightfully intense, soul-searching, deep and revealing. Love it!
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  • From ANON - Jasmine on November 26, 2004
    Yay!! Some honesty out of the old bat!!! And man oh man, that was the best line ever, about 'were you fucking a concept or an elf?' - it soooo cut to the heart of Elrond's attempts at avoiding the cruelty against Legolas!! Beautiful chapter (as always, with your writing, actually!) I keep longing for the twins to meet my favorite archer.... I hope that's in store for them someday! Their insight is fascinating - how you have shown them learning the truth through all of Elrond's subterfuge - and I think they're assessments of future situations would be fun, like that of the Thranduil/Meril/Leggy relationships...

    Thanks again for entertaining me so well!!


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  • From ANON - Thalionwen on November 24, 2004
    Erobey, meldis... I was literaly moved to tears by this last chapter. What sorrow! What guilt!. And what will be found when the true cause, the very *core* of Elrond's sundered heart is exposed?... I applaud you for not taking the easy way out and making the Lord of Imladris into a 'cut-and-dry-villain'. Instead, you present a complex and tortured soul, a character that is not so easy to hate ( thus the twin's dilemma... ). I will follow this amazing story until the very end!!
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on November 22, 2004
    As always totally WOW! Fantastic, well done

    huggs
    louise
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  • From ANON - Shelly on November 20, 2004
    HA! I do love Elrond dearly, but not in this story. He deserved that. Hmm Glorfindel needs someone. I volunteer! *laugh* You are doing an awesome job with this.

    Stupid ff.net!
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  • From ANON - Ash on November 14, 2004
    Sorry, sorry, sorry! I know I haven't reviewed in a dog's age. I've been having alot of trouble logging on to aff.net.

    This is such a kick-ass fic! (I know that sounded childish, I couldn't help it. But it's great!!)

    Just tell me something; did you intend this to eventually become a Legolas/Erestor fic? Or was it kinda... go with the flow? I couldn't care less, it's awesome!!

    BTW, do you have a livejournal or anything? Just wondering

    ~Ash
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  • From ANON - Kryspen on November 06, 2004
    I LOVE the twins... They were not easily misled by Elrond's panicked misdirection. I really enjoy their, and Glorfindel's, calm common sense and wisdom that guides their decision making and actions..

    wha what did I read in one of the review responses...? "And unfortunately the finale is rather traumatic..." *GASP* Was this a 'possible' ending? An ending with more stuff happening after the traumatic stuff? Some comfort stuff, justice and closure for Legolas' long suffering at the hands of utterly loathsome and despicable characters... argh!

    ^_^ Kryspen
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  • From ANON - Thalionwen on November 06, 2004
    Sweet Eru, Erobey!. Chapter 80 was absolutely oustanding!!!!. What an incredible psychological and emotional journey...and how very gratifying to see Legolas finally begin the process to true healing!. Chapter 81 has also left me speechless. I can sense Elrond's desperation as the lies, desires and delusions are now in danger of toppling all around him. You are MASTL meL meldiramin...
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  • From ANON - uppacrick on November 06, 2004
    Hi, Just wanted to weigh in and let you know how much I am enjoying your story. When I first found it, I could barely drag myself away from reading it to sleep and go to work -- I was hooked! I truly admire your ability for description and the deep emotional complexity you bring to your characters. I can only imagine how much work it takes to bring this to fruition. But please know that your effort is much appreciated. Looking forward to future chapters...
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  • From ANON - Shelly aka ivorybrowneyes @ ff.net on November 05, 2004
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I hope Orophin and Erestor's other mate allow Legolas into their relationship(s)! Elrond is a meanie.

    You rock!
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  • From ANON - BK on November 03, 2004
    Thank you for this beautiful story. It is totally incredible.
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  • From ANON - sarah on October 27, 2004
    Hello,

    really love this chapter! So important to the story. Without these chapters with Erestor, Legolas would have no real healing. These things have to be brought out and taken care of. The heart's healing is just as important if not more so then solving what went on Erebor. I cannot tell you how much I appreciate the effort you've put into these chapters to give Legolas' some heart ease. These chapters show many important things like talking does help if our confidences are given to the right person. The tendency is to bury these things inside and feel ashamed. They also show that one doesn't need a degree to help someone, one needs love for that person.
    Thank you so much for patiently crafting a wonderful story instead of rushing to the end. A good story takes from the writer and is given our patience and care and yours shows that wonderful quality of having an author who will give the words the care and time they need. Your story has helped me see myself and aided me in my life.
    When Feud is completed these chapters with Erestor will shine and help show Feud as the masterpiece it truly is.
    Thank you!
    Sarah
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  • From ANON - Jasmine on October 21, 2004
    The end of his bliss??? I dunno, dude - it hasn't been a very long... I hope that a happy ending will eventually find our poor tormented Woodelf. I know I've told you before, but I absolutely love your attention to detail and characterization, and you have me thoroughly hooked on the plot!! I was actually hoping that Elrond would realize his errors and truly come to love Legolas, bringing healing for them both (what's that saying about a painter neglects to paint his own house, a doctor neglects to heal himself? Well I was hoping that Elrond, who has such capacity to be gentle, wise, and sensitive to others would apply that both to himself and Legolas, and atone for his wrongs...) But I have to admit I'm also glad that you gave Legolas a partner - it was seeming like any happiness with Elrond would be a horribly long time in coming, lol!! I really can't wait for his sons to find out about his cruelty.. hehe, and his parents-in-law... I hope you do eventually redeem him. I'm such a sucker for happy endings. Anyhow, back to work for me! Thanks again for keeping updating this - your talent amazes me, and I can't wait to see where you take us next! (Trials? Lorien? Yee-haw!) :)
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  • From MorierBlackleaf on October 21, 2004
    "Valar! I want to come!"

    That was great! Wonderful chapter. I'm pacified that Legolas was happy for a while. Do you mean that you had originally intended to let Elrond have Legolas?!? Oh my, I'm rather glad you are a sinner, then.


    Morier
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