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  • From ANON - Shanna on October 21, 2004
    Feud He indernderful. It is better Legolas/Erestor. You write very well.
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  • From ANON - Calenharn Elflover on October 21, 2004
    Eighty chapters and still going strong?!! Still writing just as marvelously?! Still binding us in thrall, compelling us to read your words?!

    *shakes head in admiration*

    Poor broken, depraved Legolas. The horror of it - that he would actually have submitted under the chastisement, if Fearfaron hot iot intervened. That was entirely unexpected. *shudders*

    Wonderful compassionate Erestor.

    But oh, I do not like the implied threat ... that this chapter was the end of bliss for Legolas (Bliss?! Emotional torment!) for quite some time. Ai.


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  • From MorierBlackleaf on October 15, 2004
    I fear I begin to repeat myself, but:

    Makes me feel so fine, it's such a rush
    Helps to relieve the mind, and it's good for us

    I enjoyed their conversation. It made Legolas' sudden acceptance of Erestor more palatable to me, as I was rather keen on Legolas beating Erestor senseless before he spent his night of tethering passion. As always, am waiting impatiently for more.

    Morier
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on October 10, 2004
    As always quite quite excellent, a wonderful staory and a great chapter, fantastically weaved

    huggs
    louise
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  • From on September 29, 2004
    Well, that certainly is a place to leave us hanging. I'd kick and scream if it I wasn't standing in awe over the talent it takes to do that. You have my congrads, this story is extremely well thought out and is very interesting. I'm waiting on baited breath to see how this all turns out.
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  • From MorierBlackleaf on September 26, 2004
    I don't have the heart to remove any of my reviews, either, so sometimes I will try to load the reviews page for Painful Memoirs and end up leaving it aly uny until it finally loads. But of course, by then someone else has reviewed, and the process must start again. Oh, I wouldn't blame Legolas for wanting to avoid Thranduil, but not having Thranduil as an enemy is relieving. See, now, I'm reading your story instead of writing mine, like I told myself I would do this morning. D'oh! So many questions yet to be answered. The plot is becoming very twisted. I imagine that by the end, I'll have to reread the whole novella just to understand it all! (Not that I'm complaining, mind you.) Great chapter, looking forward to more.

    Morier
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  • From ANON - waters_reflection on September 26, 2004
    I hate Meril, I despise her. She knows that the whole thing wasn't Legalos's fault but yet she lets him suffer, torments him. She's cruel and she says she does it to protect her son. If the truth came out her son wouldn't have suffer nearly as much as Legalos did. Thranduil needs to realize that he is Legalos's father when is that going to come out. I think that Meril only seems to care for power, she's the royal consort does that mean she is not the queen. I personally find her to be very manipulating adn so disgusting. She's needs to be horribly disfigured, i hate her. I hope she suffers later on, suffers a lot.
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique@talk21.com on September 25, 2004
    fantastic! Amazing epic

    huggs
    louise
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  • From MorierBlackleaf on September 20, 2004
    *Crossing my fingers* Ok, let's hope that this one makes it through. This may be the second, third, or fourth review from me, I don't know. I can't get your review page to load -- you have too many reviews! -- so I can't tell if my attempts at reviewing have gone through. Er, well, not too many, but enough to make the page stop loading before it gets to recent reviews. I digress, however. Wonderful chapter. I'm excited to see that Thranduil is outraged at Legolas' tormented childhood. I ry wiy wish he had flogged him, but I can see why he didn't. I rather like your Thranduil, even if he is a pompous ass. It seems like the truth is finally disseminating throughout the characters in the story, and this makes me worry over Legolas' fleeting peace of mind. Ah well. I like angst. Update soon (sooner than me, so I have an excuse to procrastinate writing, LOL).

    Morier
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  • From ANON - cesca on September 19, 2004
    Thank you, thank you , thank you. This story has brought out into the open a part of my life that had remained hidden. I was able to talk to my mother about my own abuse as a child by my brother. We both had really known but we had not talked about it. I can't say that it was not painful, but it was one of the best things that has ever happened to me. I admit that I started reading because it had great sex scenes, but now I'm reading because you are such a good writer. I want more! Thank you again.
    Cesca
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  • From ANON - Dragonlady on September 19, 2004
    This has become an epic that continues to engross and amaze. Keep the chapters coming cannot wait for 77....
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  • From ANON - giggle on September 18, 2004
    #75

    The OMG chapter.

    Seldom am I left speechless but this chapter completely knocke for for a loop. Starting from Erestor caught in a tree, then the boots hitting the ground and scaring Erestor half to death but the best was Legolas half hanging out of a tree and still able to "perform". Yikes. The images of that will be burned into my brain forever.

    Then the sex toys. It got positively hot, humid and harried in the old Woodland Realm that nite. What a nice interlude for Legolas. He needs all the love and satisfaction he can get considering you are only half way through this story and he probably has a lot of angst to suffer through yet. I haven't read the next chapter yet but I am sure it is not all roses. I hope he and Erestor get some more fun time before "real life" intrudes.

    I am so utterly blown away by this chapter. After Malthen and Elrond taking such unfair advantage of the poor Prince I am so glad he finally got someone who is really going to make him happy physically. It will be interesting to see if you provide someone to make him emotionally happy also. He may have to wait for Aman before he gets that type of healing.

    I am saving the next chapter for tomorrow nite. I think this one chapter was enough for tonite. I will go take a cold shower now. giggle
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  • From ANON - crystal on September 17, 2004
    Sad, but i think that legolas will not take the news very well, that Thranduil ordered a flogging... x__X Poor legolas, pain either way~!
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  • From ANON - MourningElectra on September 16, 2004
    Nice to see the Thranduil I know and love emerging at long last! Thrandy is my hero and the eevil Thranduil stories get on my nerves, but your is so well written (and, OK, so hot) that I have stucj with it even when the King of Mirkwood deserved to be shot in the head. I like this turn of events! As a father, there is tenderness and beauty and his new child gives him insight into how he has cruelly used Legolas. Can't wait to see where this is going!
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  • From ANON - Thalionwen on September 16, 2004
    Hi erobey! I have no idea if this review will get to you (being that there are over a hundred!). But I must tell you, this chapter was overwhelming!. The loving careanduanduil shows to the infant prince and the way you have interposed his grl acl acknowledgement of his utter neglect of his first-born was touching and bittersweet.. The character of Meril intrigues me so...I wonder what will be revealed about her. I wait with baited breath for your next update mellon nin!
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