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Reviews for Faded Light: Book II

By : Laurin
  • From ANON - Sarah on April 04, 2011
    That no good Anirion, how dare he play with Saelbeth's heart. But, naive Saelbeth for believing in him, I mean, I'm sure he could have gotten anyone he wanted maybe. Smh...that's ok! Let's hope things are all better now and Saelbeth doens't make the same mistakes twice.
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  • From victorramirez on March 23, 2011
    Interesting! can you sent me the updates to my e-mai and facebook. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on March 21, 2011
    I read this chapter a little while ago and I thought I should review because I know it makes people feel good :) I do have to say im sleepy and don't exactly remember this particular chapter but I have read this story about 6 times haha (from book I!). I know what's going on in general and it has me all types of excited!!! I check for updates everyday but I'm considering not coming for a month in the hopes that I can surprise myself with a couple of chapters at least ;) So please update when you have time and completed chapters! This story is my only reason for coming here. It's the best! :)
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  • From ANON - Del on February 20, 2011
    WOW! So much happened since tha last time I read... I don't know what to comment on! The stroy sure is moving forwards! As always, I love the different perspectives each chapter has and the development of the so-called secondary characters (I don't think they can be called that any longer). So, I'll just leave you with a "Good work!" and a "please keep it up!".
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  • From ANON - Sarah on January 26, 2011
    What a sweet yet sad scene between Legolas and Mel! Mel is just so adorable. I love how scandalized Legolas was at the prospect of Mel piercing her ears haha. I've gotten mine pierced a lot of times but I never keep them....haha. I can't wait to figure out if they ever make it to Mirkwood/Greenwood. I also can't wait for the next chapter and scenes with Benain! I think the children are my favorite. I do think there may have been a mistake in this chapter. You write a similar sentence twice, just changing the words haradrim and harawaith(?). I'm not sure if Legolas was supposed to be repeating himself twice but I think maybe you copied it and didnt delete one. If that wasn't the case then oops, but it does read a little strange. :) Love your story and will be awaiting updates!!!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on January 11, 2011
    LOVED.chap.25/it.makes.me.so.sad.that.dafi.cant.try.to.leave.with.rumil.and.his.brothers/i.hope.mel.gets.somewhere.safe.and.legolas.finds.a.way.home.after.retrieving.mel/i.hope.to.see.more.with.benain.such.as.saving.animals.orhealing.someone/maybe.he.can.magically.recognize.a.picture.of.his.adar/that.would.be.nice.haha:)
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  • From ANON - Sarah on January 11, 2011
    Very.excited.for.this.part.one.of.two!sorry.my.space.bar.doesnt.work..I.love.this.story.and.im.going.to.read.the.next.chapter.now!:)
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  • From ANON - Del on January 04, 2011
    Sorry for not reviewing earlier! I've been very busy with the holidays and only just now managed to have some time to read all your updates... and they were wonderfull as always. You just keep thickening the plot! Danger to Mel, danger to Tadion... ever present danger to Legolas? God is their world dangerous! LOL But I like it how thing seem to be slowly coming together, and the attention you pay to se so-called side characters. I quite like Leralonde, for example (and his whole storyline). Well, Im leaving on summer holidays in a few days (Brazil, here I come!), so I think I won't be able to come back to read till february...but I promise I will update then! So please keep up the good work and happy new year!
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  • From ziggystardust3 on December 18, 2010
    Another fabulous chapter, with a thickening plot, deftly handled emotions and light descriptions as always that never fail to imprint themselves firmly in my imagination.
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  • From ANON - Del on December 18, 2010
    Oh...I just saw the new chaapter (can't believe I was so busy I took so long). Do i have to know what tadion is talking about or is it some new mystery?...Maybe tomorrow when I'm more awake I'll remember some detail! And I liked the foreshadowing of Legolas/Dafi's dreams!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 16, 2010
    Oh, Dafi's dream was just wrenching, as was his inability to find any comfort in Javad's concern. He's holding on by such a fine thread, and it really is painful to see his struggle. It's a tribute to you as a writer that you can weave such a tapestry of emotion!
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  • From ANON - Eli on December 13, 2010
    Just thought I'd let you know, I've been following your story since the beginning of Book II, really enjoying it. I think you've done a good job with the characterisations and the plot is original. Love the quick updates too - I don't think there is such a thing as updating too much ;) but it is nice to not have to wait months between updates. Longer chapters are always nice which is also happening. I even introduced my friend who does not read mpreg, to this story and she really enjoys it, so good work! :)
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  • From ziggystardust3 on December 13, 2010
    As always, beautifully light and delicate touch dealing with these dark themes.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2010
    There was such a bittersweet quality to this chapter. I'm not even sure we have the right word in English for how it made me feel... but any chapter that can so move the reader, well... well done!
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  • From ANON - Del on December 12, 2010
    It's nice to have news of Leralonde... but a bit sad that he is still apart from Saelbeth (hope you fix up soon!LOL). You have all these interesting characters that I almost don't know which I want you to write about in the next chapter! Oh, and it is not possible to update too often!
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