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Reviews for My Twisted Road To Life: Through A Mirror Darkly

By : Shanastay
  • From ANON - Aranel3 on July 25, 2004
    Ahh so it all becomes clear why Jan is so scared of Haldir. Glorfindel
    is
    >ever portrayed as regally and wise as he should be thrown in with a
    lil
    >good mischief. Love the "darkling" description for Elrond etc.

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  • From ANON - White roses for me on July 25, 2004
    I love this story. Please update soon

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  • From ANON - White roses for me on July 25, 2004
    Wow this is a great plotline! I think the story is going fine but I
    think
    >you should describe the scenery a little bit more. I always forget to
    do
    >that in my writing. Are the Prince and her going to meet? You know if
    they
    >actually do, you could have them just be friends.
    >Please update soon!

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  • From ANON - DreadLadyFreya on July 25, 2004
    Wow! Masterfully done! I can understand why this chappie was so long in coming. It was a difficult concept to get across, but you succeeded with flying colors. I found it a little eery 'seeing' things unfold third person. You said you'd wanted to give it a disjointed feeling. . . Oh, yeah, you nailed that but good. The feelings of lack of control and helplessness were almost palpable.

    BRAVA!
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  • From ANON - Talasi on July 25, 2004
    Yay! *dances around* Shana updated! Stunning descriptions! While I can imagine how confusing it is for the elves, and even Legolas who is seeing this, I am not lost myself. Quite an accomplishment to confuse and simplify at the same time. Their reactions are realistic. The parts that come through Legolas are just enough to confuse the elves and clue us in on what he is seeing.

    (Of course, I also love being in the credits, especially when I am tossed over the shoulder of an elf and carried off to do naughty things......GO ME )

    *Bows to the mastah*

    Tal
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  • From ANON - Michelleb102 on July 25, 2004
    Geez, could anything else happen to this poor woman? I'm hoping that the snap that she heard and felt isn't what I think it is...that would be horrible!

    I love your writing style. The song breaks are great, and always seem to fit the mood perfectly. I hope you'll be posting the next chapter soon...I can't wait to find out what happens.

    Keep up the good work

    Michelle
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  • From ANON - allura on July 25, 2004
    i soooo can not wait to get her to middle earth and have our lovelies meet!! please update soon.. i am in dire need here.. lol.. thanks wren
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  • From ANON - LuthienTinuviel on July 25, 2004
    Thank you...

    And the story's good, really. I've always preferred the more realistic non-blubby type tales. They're both (bubbly + non-bubbly) equally enjoyable, but these sort always lead to more food for thought.
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  • From ANON - Shanastay on July 25, 2004
    LuthienTinuviel said
    > Is military assaults against innocent women in America actually devised?

    Authoress' response:
    To my knowledge assaults against women are not planned by the military. However a report recently issby tby the joint chiefs of staff indicated that commanders are aware of assaults and do nothing to punish the offenders and in fact punish the victims fominoming forward. That is not speculation, it is substantiated fact. In the story I took the findings of that report a step further, hence the story is fiction. The attack in question in the story actually happened to me and new information has come to indicate I was specifically targeted, but not necessarily at the direction of the military
    Pl
    Please feel free to contact me if you or anyone else have any further questions.
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  • From ANON - LuthienTinuviel on July 25, 2004
    Is military assaults against innocent women in America actually devised?
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  • From ANON - DreadLadyFreya on July 25, 2004
    Whoa! You're right! Didn't see that one coming. Hayden's demise was TOO quick & easy, he should have suffered more. Jan should have cut off his "little friend" and beaten him to death with it!!! *scowls menacingly* Okay, I'm back. "We" *grins sheepishly* need to get that girl to M.E.! She really needs some good elf lovin'. On that note, I must say I'm enjoying your disclaimers almost as much as this story.
    ;} Freya
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  • From ANON - AzureDragoness on July 25, 2004
    *gleeful squeal* He died! WOO! *bounces* Eee? :3
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  • From ANON - AzureDragoness on July 25, 2004
    Man, I'm glad I aint those two right now..... XD Moremoremore! So entertaining.....
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  • From ANON - Larimar on July 21, 2004
    She really can't getreakreak in this chapter, can she? You really have a gift for evening the mix of strength and vulnerability in this character. Her appearance in middle earth this way was brilliant!
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  • From ANON - Tal on July 21, 2004
    You know what I think....but I'll tell you again anyways. LOVE IT! I hate cliffhangers, but this is an excellent addition to a wonderful story! At least she is ME now. Whew!

    The twist of English not being Westron puts another spin on things too. Could things be more complicated for poor Jan? I think not. Pretty good idea......if I do say so myself. :D (Not my idea....just inspired by me)

    The realization that they are picking up on each others thoughts and feelings is also well portrayed. You get across how confusing it is for both of them.

    Of course, Jansenssense of humor just kills me. "Hello. Kinda dead here." ROFLMAO Always and forever a smart ass. Flipping off the Valar was priceless too. Typical Jan. Can't imaging where she gets that from. *looks at Shana*

    Talasi
    Haldir Worshiper, Craig Parker swooner, and Keeper of Erestor's Heart
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