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Reviews for Rider of the Mark

By : ZeDrippyVessel
  • From ANON - Nakhti on January 17, 2005

    And was immediately graced with the sight of a long bare leg, being thrown over the side of the mare.

    *** AAAAAAAAAH OOOOOOOOOOOOH!***

    Aefre settled into the saddle and arranged her skirts around her thighs.

    ***legslegslegs long firm legs around my neck...***

    LAMO!!! oh man, I love the way you do Gamlings thoughts, they are always so hilarious, and so brilliantly inserted! *insert joke about inserting things here*

    I love the way their relationship is blossoming, with them finally getting to talk and find out about each other, but DAMMIT! When are we going to get to the smutty stuff!! hehehe. MORE PLEASE!!
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  • From ANON - Nakhti on January 11, 2005
    LOVING THIS STORY!!! many an unattractive snigger and snort from my direction as I read Gamlings inner thoughts- so hilarious! I was laughing my arse of at this:

    ***Argh! The wagging finger again! Bite it! Quickly!***

    I love the banter between these two, they are SOOO made for each other! (if he can ever get her to shut up long enough to kiss her again) Theyre like a bickering married couple already, so why dont they just get on with ut?

    She was growling, and it was NOT a pretty sound. She jabbed her finger in his face. "You are such a man!"

    "Thank you for noticing, My Lady."

    hehehe!! I cant wait for you to post the next chapter- I check every day!
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  • From ANON - Juliette on January 10, 2005
    Loved it! They kissed (YES! A kiss, precious!) and then they figured out that they had been set up by the Terrible Twosome of Matchmaking. What are they going to do about it? And oh yeah, where are their horses? More soon please!
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  • From ANON - ellenflower on January 04, 2005
    "seen stallions covering mares with more romantic skills"
    I love that line! I think it's nice that you have a love story beginning in a very rough time in LOTR. It's as if Eomer and Eowyn need something to distract them from the coming war. Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Juliette on January 04, 2005
    Oh my! The matchmaking has begun in earnest, and now Theoden is about to get into the game! I really liked the scene between Eomer, Eowyn and Theoden, it made them seem like a real family, which you hardly get in other fics. I'm eager to see what the King is going to do, and what happens when Gamling catches up with Aefre. More soon please!
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  • From kathmco on January 03, 2005
    Gads, Zee...read this once at LB, second time here, and it gets better with every read...

    Can't wait till he catches her (soon, I hope!)

    Kath
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  • From ANON - Felicia on January 02, 2005
    It is always a pleasure to read anything you write. I got a particular chuckle when Theodon chided Eomer about not being cupid. (I was a huge fan of him as Cesear, personally). I keep looking forward to your stories. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - eRose on January 01, 2005
    Well, another excellent story! Thank you - I've enjoyed your others tremendously. Have you ever thought of writing non-fanfic for publication? I think you have the talent for it.
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  • From ANON - Juliette on December 27, 2004
    Great update! I liked Aefre's ritual for cleansing the room from the filth and poison of Grima and his Master. Now it looks like Eomer and Eowyn are going to go into matchmaking mode? Please update soon, I can't wait to see what passes for matchmaking for those two!
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  • From ANON - Juliette on December 20, 2004
    A great chapter! I was giggling at Legolas's remarks and at the idea of Eowyn and Eomer as matchmakers. What's Gamling going to say when he gets back and finds that everybody's talking about him and Aefre, and that their behavior thus far has marked her as his? And what's Aefre going to think? Please update soon!
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  • From kathmco on December 14, 2004
    I love this story...such potential! Update soon, Zee!
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  • From ANON - Juliette on December 14, 2004
    That was so cute! l love Aefre, and the convo between Theoden and Gamling was great. Shows how much trust the King puts in his faithful Marshal. More soon please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2004
    At last a new lord of the rings fic!
    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH make it a long one pleeeeease!!!!!
    I really enjoyed reading the first chapter.
    But I cant BELIEVE you killed Haldir! :(


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  • From ANON - Vi Janaway on December 07, 2004
    Hi Zee!!!!
    So you are at it again...
    Gooooood stuff.
    Vi
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  • From ANON - Juliette on December 07, 2004
    LOL! You are so right about Gamling needing to get some! This is really good so far, please update soon!
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