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By : Esteliel
  • From ANON - Mirasaui on October 05, 2003
    Glad to see that you are back and returning to writing, and am happy that you have started a sequel to Anestel. I like the way you pay tay the relationship between Glorfindel and Legolas. In the back of his mind, Glorfindel hopes the time will come when the Noldor and Sindar can mend their hatred. He hints at such to Legolas. Also, he feels a strong love for the prince, but his pride is such that he has trouble showing it in public. But that has started to change. Legloas is not only getting the chance to stretch his wings, but to restore his confidence and reputation as well. Glorfindel is loosening some of the ties that bind, and is also starting to treat Leglolas more like a mate than a possession. Well, somewhat--lol. Love the transitions here. Great story, look forward to future updates.

    Mirasaui
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  • From ANON - JastaElf on October 05, 2003
    Oh, Esteliel, it's *good* to have you back! I hope you enjoyed your work experiences, and equally hope RL allows you more time to write now. :-)

    This was a beautiful chapter--nice to see some softening on Glorfindel's part, an awareness of what a sweet lover he has, and what their relationship COULD be if Glorfindel allows it. I know there are loving d/s relationships, and that the best ones ARE in fact based on mutual respect and affection within the rules each have worked on... it can be so for these two! Doesn't have to make the sex any less hot, either... heh heh heh...

    Anyway, it really is good to have you back!
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  • From ANON - Summer Storm on October 05, 2003
    wow, the long waited next chapter...=)
    loved the riding scene and also the little fall one, where the Eldar bares his soul to the princeling...
    they're made for each other, though the journey between the first meeting and being soul mates are quite eventful, i'd say..+)
    Do keep it coming, plz!!
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  • From ANON - Nina on October 05, 2003
    An update? What a good surprise! Good chapter! Please, continue it.
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  • From ANON - Aly on October 05, 2003
    Yay! I'm excited for the new update and can't wait to read more! I hope you enjoyed your time abroad. I like how Glorfindel is starting to "soften" up a bit and open up to Legolas.
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  • From ANON - daughterofthemidnightmoon on October 04, 2003
    *Sqeals with happiness*

    Do you know how upset i was when i found you deleated Anestel from fanfiction.net?! I seriously went through every single page of stories trying to find yours but couldn't! But now i found it again, and a sequel to boot! Yeah!! Oh, happiness abounds. Anyway, great stuff. I love how Legolas if finally starting to train as a warrior. But what will this mean? I mean, he's being trained by the enemy. Will this mean that one day he may have to face his brothers and father in battle? That would be an interesting plot bunny... Anyway, great stuff. Legolas' angst and his second-thoughts about his position in life are great. Looking forward to more angst in the future. Hurry with more!

    -Daughter of the Midnight Moon
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  • From ANON - Aly on September 18, 2003
    Nice to see a sequel. Now get to writing more of it. ;) I'm glad your continuing on with this storyline. It will be interesting to see what plot lines you hatch up for this one. Will you use Legolas' ability to somewhat communicate with his brother to get more information about male fertility? You have such a wide range of possibilities for this story, I can't wait to see what you write! Please update soon. ;)
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  • From ANON - Oakwoods on September 09, 2003
    I was just wondering what happed to this story the other day. A friend told me that you were continuing it and found this web page.
    Write More please. Son! This is my favorite story about young Legolas. How is he going to respond to training? How will the other elves repsonsd to him being allowed to train?

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  • From ANON - Stranger who can\ind ind her name on August 22, 2003
    Sequel, eh? Hm, I've read your previous story Anestel (sorry if I spelled wrong) and I'm kinda unsure what to think about that (and this as well). On one hand I hate read when Legolas, who's kinda my favourite character, gets tortured in different ways, raped, beaten etc... Even if it's just fiction it squicks me. But when I started read this 'serie', I was hooked against my will! So I surrender, even if I don't like the idea, I will keep reading.
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  • From ANON - Anita on August 20, 2003
    The sequel! I am very glad to see this and curious how Legolas' life will continue.
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  • From ANON - pris on August 19, 2003
    there you go making this story so enticing that your reader prays it doeasn't end and that we are lucky enough to see legolas grow and glorfindel realize his love for legolas.....keep up the good work ;)
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  • From ANON - JastaElf on August 19, 2003
    Oh dear, why does it frighten me to think Legolas can conceive even if he does not want to?? Are we foreshadowing something terrible here? What if someone kidnapped him and got him pregnant, and Glorfindel repudiated him? And then the baby dies, and Legolas has been relegated to nothing more than a dishonoureisonisoner to Glorfindel's lust? Oh dear, oh dear!!

    Hmm, that could be--err--fun! :-)

    Anyway, another excellent chapter. I am hopelessly addicted to these stories... :-)
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  • From ANON - Nina on August 19, 2003
    Interesting that male elves would be more fertile than femele elves . I wonder if Thranduil will ever appear here and if he does, what would he say to his son? I would like to see him and legolas understand each other.
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  • From Vuaryn on August 19, 2003
    Beautiful Esteliel. I hope Glorfindel will treat him right. It hurts to see our favourite elf being tortured all the time.
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  • From ANON - Gilraen on August 18, 2003
    Oh Esteliel you're back!! :D I've missed your writing alot and i thought you won't write sequel to "Anastel" but here it is! I hope to see more soon because this looks just as interesting as those before.
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