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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh still so mysterious. its still kinda corny but better then the last one. i think that ur speding too much time on these two characters so the story still seems like its flat. but thats just my opinion. i hope to read more.
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh. interesting, but somewhat corny. legolas is also out of character but oh well. i look forward to reading more