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Obedience to a king	By : lovinghimonly Category: Lord of the Rings Movies > Hobbit, The Views: 4832 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: I don't own LotR, The Hobbit, or any other Tolkien world. The story is meant only for entertainment purposes, not money. English is not my native tongue. Please excuse errors. Constructive criticism is most welcome.

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When Baineth walked into her chamber, she saw that her father and mother were waiting for her.
"Have you had a nice day my daughter"?
Baineth nodded, and tried to avoid her father´s gaze. Malfinnor approached his daughter, and lifted up her chin, eyeing her face closely
"You look excited and somewhat nervous. Tell me where are you coming from, and what have you been doing"?
Baineth knew that she could not hide her emotions from her father. Her nervousness and fear were clearly visible.
"I massaged the king, and hurried to my chamber because it was getting late. I feared that you would notice my absence, and that you might punish me".
His daughter´s honest words convinced him
"You are right, I would indeed punish you, if you had been elsewhere. To serve our king is honorable. Your absence from your chamber in such a case is accepted by me".
Malfinnor let go of her chin, and walked over to her small table, where his wife was sitting.
The expression on her mother´s face told Baineth, that she had expected her daughter to meet with some ellon in secret. She did in fact meet with one, but not in secret. Everything was happening openly, to everyones knowledge. But what they did behind the king´s door, was unknown. Baineth hoped that it would remain their secret. She sat down with her parents, who had brought fruits and salad with them, and together they enjoyed their evening meal. Normally they ate with all other elves in the dining hall, but tonight was one of those nights when her parents wished to spend the evening together as family. Baineth was their only child, which they had begotten, after they had given up hope, to ever be blessed by a small elling. Malfinnor guarded her as his treasure and due to fear of Baineth father, most ellon´s dared not to approach her. Her father was a council member, who was highly respected in the kingdom, and her mother was a healer. Baineth tried to follow in her mother´s footsteps, but the king´s constant requests to see her, made it hard for her to continue learning. To her horror her father had noticed it.
"I see that the king requests your presence often these days. In fact, he has been doing that a lot over the last few months".
Baineth nodded
"Yes, he is always tense. No matter how often I try to ease his tension by massaging him, he calls me back again and again".
"I have noticed this already. I guess that the darkness in his forest, and the situation with the dwarfs takes its toll on him. It disturbes many of us in the council".
"What about the dwarfs"? Baineth was not aware, that there were problems with the dwarfs of Erebor.
"It is not your position to ask such questions". Her father´s reply silenced Baineth instantly.
"But it is very good, that you personally serve out king. I am happy that your time is spend in his service, instead of hunting for ellons, as most elleth in your age do".
She simply nodded and ate her meal, trying not to blush from her father´s words. After her parents had left, a maid came to her chamber and removed the plates from the table, and wished her a good night. Baineth locked her door and bathed before she dressed for the night. She felt slightly nervous about the king´s words. She knew that he meant them. In the beginning she had been curious about him. She wondered how his touch would feel like, or how he would look like without his clothes. Natural thoughts for an elleth of her age. But her father forbade such thoughts strictly. It had the opposite effect than he had hoped for. When Thranduil had first touched intentionally , she felt a shiver run through her entire body, making her tremble. But he had not stopped there, placing her hands on his bare chest the king had said "Feel me".
Her fingers had touched his warm and smooth skin, travelling up, gently brushing over his nipples, before they travelled down to his navel, feeling and experiencing as they moved up and down his chest. Thranduil had watched her attentively, and knew that her father had restricted her too much. Her natural needs could not be buried by her father´s command. Thranduil understood then, that she would probably obey him willingly due to her natural curiosity.

The next day was different for her. The king rode out into the forest, after two reports had reached the king, that orcs had been seen near his borders. Baineth spend the whole at the healers ward, learning new things, and when it was getting late, she returned to her chamber, and prepared herself for the night. The knock on her door came in the middle of the night. A guard stood in the corridor, breathless and his voice full of urgency. The king had commanded her presence in his chamber. She was requested to massage him. She picked up the oil and towel and headed towards the king´s corridor, thinking about the guard, who had come running to her door. The king knew how to chase his subjects around. And she was one of them.
His servant awaited her at the door, and walked with her into the king´s chamber
"Our king is taking a bath". He pointed his finger over to another door. "Do not let him wait".
Baineth stood in the king´s large chamber and hesitated. She had never been inside of the king´s bathroom. Her gaze wandered through his chamber and finally returned to the bathroom door. She took a deep breath and approached the door quickly. It was never a good idea, to let him wait. She knocked on the door, and when there was no reply, she opened it slowly and peeked inside. Her eyes widened at the size of his bathroom. It was huge. She spotted the king in a pool at the very end of the room. He smirked at her and waved her over to him. Baineth approached him slowly, and felt insecure in this new surrounding. She placed the oil and towel upon a chair and looked down to the king, who was naked in the pool. His deep and commanding voice gave her goosebumps
"Undress yourself and join me".
His words made her blush. No one ellon had ever seen her naked. Thranduil´s expression darkened at her hesitation, and she quickly began to undress, fearing the king´s wrath. She looked down at him, wearing no more then her thin underdress, and waited for further instructions. Thranduil bore an incredulous expression on his face
"Have you not heard my command? I told you to undress yourself. That means everything, including that" he nodded his head towards her, his expression clearly displeased
She obeyed him and removed her underdress, frowning as she pulled it off over her head. Baineth had hoped that he might tolerate the dress. At least she had tried it.
The king swam over to Baineth, and held his hand out to her, lowering her into the water. Baineth gasped as the water was quite hot and she bend her knees, pulling her legs closer to her body, but to no avail. He plunged her into the hot water, and pulled her up to its surface. She looked up at him and saw his lust filled gaze. There were no more words spoken between them. He swam with her over to the other side and sat himself at the edge of the pool, spreading his legs, his eyes commanding her to satisfy his lust. Baineth stood between his legs and touched his erect shaft. She kissed the tip of his length and began to circle it slowly with her tongue. Thranduil leaned back against the stone wall and watched her. The hot water began to turn her skin red, and the sight of her plump breasts and her nipples aroused him even more. He leaned his head back, and enjoyed her attention. Baineth licked along his length, pushing it gently against his trained belly, she licked his balls, taking them into her mouth, while her hand pumped his shaft. Thranduil let out a groan and placed his hands onto her shoulders, holding them tightly. She licked the underside of his shaft, making him hiss as her tongue played with the hole on the tip of his shaft. Pressing it gently, before her lips glided over his shaft, taking him in deeply. A shiver ran through his body as she sucked him hard. Placing his hands on her head he caressed it with his thumbs, while he edged closer to his peak. She took him firmly in her mouth, and bobbed her head up and down ,while humming as she enjoyed to feel his arousal. His shaft throbbed wildly and she knew he was close. Playing with his tip once again, she took him in as far as she could, hearing him moan out loud as his seed spilled down her throat. She continued to suck on his length, bobbing her head slowly up and down, causing him another erection before his shaft had softened. Thranduil growled out and grabbed her hair, pulling her mouth off of his shaft
"You are very naughty tonight".
With a swift move, he had entered the pool, and had lifted her out onto the edge where he had sat before
"Tonight I will make you feel the same pleasure, which you are giving to me. You will experience, what it means if you satisfy me".
Baineth furrowed her eyebrows and yelped when he suddenly grabbed her butt and moved her over the edge of the pool. He rested her legs on his shoulders and she stared at him in shock as he grinned evil at her, before he lowered his face to her folds. Baineth moaned out aloud, and her hands tried to grasp onto the stone floor, as his tongue licked through her folds repeatedly, making sure to tease her pearl before it descendet down to her entrance. She tried to escape his grip, but was instead pulled closer to his face by his strong arms. Thranduil circled her entrance with his tongue, and enjoyed her moans of pleasure which were often disrupted by a long hiss. This was new to her. She was never before been touched like this. Her lust flowed through her body, in short but demanding waves. He enjoyed her moans and the way her body twitched when his tongue licked her sensitive parts. It aroused him greatly. She grabbed hold of his hair, and he witnessed how she was torn between a pleasure, which she had never experienced before, and her conscience. Her body fought a battle between them, making her hands trying to push his head away, before pulling him closer to her womanhood. Her repeated pulling and pushing encouraged him to help her, to finally reach a decision. His tongue travelled up between her folds to her pearl, which he enveloped gently with his lips, sucking it demandingly. Baineth groaned out aloud as her will began to weaken, and the drive for the unknown pleasure took hold of her. Her hands grabbed his hair, while she flung her head back. Thranduil knew that he had her at his mercy. Exactly where he wanted her "mmmmhhhh my king.... ahh.... "
There was nothing more what escaped her lips than a loud and deep moan, when he had driven her over the edge. Strong waves of pleasure flooded her body, which the king lengthened, by continually stimulating her pearl. Her tensed muscles relaxed and her grip on his hair loosened. Her arms hang loose beside her body, and she leaned back against the stone wall. Baineth closed her eyes, and her body adjusted to the new sensation.
Thranduil released her swollen pearl, and looked up, marvelling at her beauty. Her cheeks were blushed heavily and her chest rose and fell quickly. The light which fell onto her breasts, made the water droplets on her skin glitter. He licked his lips and leaned over, taking one nipple into his mouth, making her to moan out loud. Thranduil sucked on her nipple and circled it with his tongue before he raised his head and looked up at her face.
"Its your turn".
Without warning he pulled her back into the pool, and sat up on its edge, spreading his legs once more. Baineth reaches the surface of the water and looked up at him through her lust filled eyes. She touched his erect shaft with her hands, pumping it hard, before she lowered her head. He felt her soft lips on the tip of his shaft and he moaned out. He leaned back, watching her play with his shaft before her mouth sucked greedily on it and her tongue battled with its soft skin. Her attention to his needs was fierce. Thranduil closed his eyes and enjoyed her somewhat aggressive treatment. It did not take long until he reached his peak for a second time.
A victorious smirk spread over his face. He knew now that he had her exactly where he wanted her. He got her on his hooks. The king got back into the water, and took hold of her hips, lifting her out again and her on the edge of the pool once more. The king placed his large hands on the sides of her head and while looking into her eyes he began to speak ancient elvish words. He did the same by laying his hand above her heart, and in the end he cupped her sex, concealing their forbidden activity.
Baineth stared at him, her eyes now calm and deep, the lust had completely vanished. Thranduil eyed her naked body and swallowed hard as he felt a lustful sensation travel down to his loins.
"You may leave now".
Baineth removed her legs from the water, and got up, walking over to the chair where the towels lay. She quickly rubbed the soft towel over her reddened skin and bowed down to retrieve her dress. She let out a yelp when the king suddenly grabbed her from behind. He pushed his hardened shaft firmly between her thighs and brought her down to her knees. Thranduil held her body close to his, while he slowly moved his shaft back and forth between her thighs. She felt his hot breath on her ear and neck and his deep and sensual moans contributed to her own arousal, which was quickly intensified as his strong shaft began to move faster between her thighs, sometimes brushing over her pearl.
His thrusts became urgent, and she suddenly felt his hot seed spill down on her thigh, as his movements gradually cease. He stopped to move entirely, and held her in place, letting his breath calm down, before he sat up straight, pulling her along with him. He sat on the floor and turned her around to face him.
He saw the arousal in her eyes and smirked at her, eyeing her body with lust. He leaned forward and let his index and middle fingers run from her knee up to her thigh, stopping where his seed had been spilled. He drew small circles in the white substance with his fingers. He looked into her eyes and lifted his fingers to her mouth, making her lick his seed off his fingers. He repeated the same thing until all his seed had found its way into her mouth.
"You have no idea, how much I want you. I wished I could sink into your depths right now, and feel the tightness and heat of your inner sex. But unfortunately I have to wait".
He gritted his teeth and growled out, while he clenched his hands to fists. Baineth noticed his now erect shaft and slowly leaned forward, never breaking their eye contact. The king nodded slowly and his hand grabbed her neck gently, bringing her mouth down upon his erect shaft. He held her head firmly with is hands, and pushed her mouth steadily and fast over his shaft, feeling the heat of her mouth around his erection. When he had almost reached his peak, he slid her off of his shaft and stood up, towering over her. He pushed his shaft back into her mouth, and thrusts into her with urgency. With a loud growl he climaxed and pushed himself for a last time deep inside of her, making her nose touch his belly. Now he was finally satisfied.
Baineth dressed herself, straightening her hair and made last adjustments on her dress. He sat on a chair and watched her every move. This was far better then anything he ever had. When she was ready to go, she knelt in front of him and he once again spoke elvish words, concealing their lustful deeds of this night. He placed his hands on her head, and held it gently, while he slowly closed the distance between them. Baineth closed her eyes and held her breath in excitement. She felt his breath on her face, on her lips, and was waiting for the kiss, which never came. She furrowed her eyebrows and opened her eyes. Baineth saw his smug face. He was smirking down at her.
"Return to your chamber now. Otherwise your father will miss you when he makes his early morning visit. Or shall I call it his early morning control"?
He arched an eyebrow at her, and she rose up quickly. Baineth was angered by his behaviour, turning around to leave him. To her surprise he spanked her butt very hard. She turned around to face him with an outraged expression on her face, when he suddenly grabbed hold of her wrist, and pulled her down, close to his face. His hot breath touched her cheek, while her eyes never left his
"I decide which kind of attention you receive from me. I decide how much you will enjoy our meetings, and it is I, who will decide how often you will climax by my hand, tongue or manhood".
His gaze suddenly turned cold and murderous, making her tremble. He grabbed her by the back of her neck and pulled her close, making his lips brush over the sensitive skin on her elven ear while he spoke his next words slow and threatening
"If you should try to find such pleasures with someone else, I will kill him. And it will be done in front of your eyes. You are mine, and mine alone. You belong to Me. Do you understand that"?
Baineth nooded obediently and he let go of her neck and wrist. She grabbed the oil bottle and towel and left his bathroom in a hurry. Once she had left his chamber, and stepped out into the corridor and breathed the cool air, trying to ease her excited mind. This visit to the king´s chamber had been different then she had expected. This was dark. The king's possessiveness made her fearful. Would he kill an elf? This question became entirely irrelevant, when she arrived at the corridor which led to her chamber. A loud bang startled her. Her father had left her chamber and walked now towards her with long, agitated steps, his face furious
"Where have you been? And why is your hair wet"?
Baineth swallowed hard and stood frozen. This did not look good.
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