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Reviews for Rider of the Mark

By : ZeDrippyVessel
  • From ANON - Nakhti on January 27, 2006
    wow, only a couple of weeks wait this time- thats customer service for you! But you know the thing about customers is, we can never have anything fast ENOUGH- we want it now now now NOW GODAMMIT!!!!
    Loved this chappie- I'm writing wedding preparations for my own story at present, and we seem to be on par with our views about the annoyance of unwanted relations!
    Great cliffie- cant help wondering who Eadignes is talking about. Perhaps a jealous/overly protective Willan? He certainly would be physically capable of pounding someone into wallpaper paste, but I doubt whether his temperament is apt to it. so who else could be trying to prematurely send someone to the halls of mandos? and who might that someone be?? Bloody hell, I hope your beta returns the next chapter soon, or it'll be them saying hi to Theoden!
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  • From ANON - Nicky on January 27, 2006
    I loved this chapter, I like the way that Gamling is trying his hardest to 'pamper or rather look after' Afre! I like the way you inject humour into the story too. I am so pleased you updated! I have been looking forward to reading this chapter, and can't wait to read about their wedding! Gamlings family sounds like they are chaotic! I look forward to reading the next chapter, till then cheerio!
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  • From ANON - Fyiarah on January 21, 2006
    Long time reader, really....first time reviewer! Bad me!
    Anyway, great character devealopment, love everything. More please!
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  • From ANON - Nakhti on January 13, 2006
    Yay! My christmas pressie arrived at last! And unlike most of the other stuff I got this year (mainly socks, jumpers and smellies- woo) it certainly didnt disappoint after all the anticipation!
    I like the way youre building up a vivid and realistic picture of post war Rohan- people never seem to think of that sort of thing, too caught up in the euphoria of victory, and just assume that everything will go back to normal again. But the words of sam have obviously been preying on your mind, as they have been on mine; how could everything just go back to the way it was after so much bad has happened? Very good question, and one you seem intent on answering- good on you. It also fits perfectly into your story, as Aefre's capability at crisis management, and her quest to get her lands back, tie into the theme of restoration very well.
    I cant wait to see how Gamling pulls that off, as well as seeing how he will EVER manage to make Aefre a proper married woman! Hope you update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Kathy on January 09, 2006
    Wonderful Zee! I was SO happy to find this chappie! I love Grunt the Mountain Man, and the line about Luandry Elves was priceless! I am loking foward to the wedding night! ;-) Kathy
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  • From ANON - Nicky on January 09, 2006
    Another fabulous chapter, one which I enjoyed reading immensley. I really like the way that Gamling and Afre get along, and the way that Gamling does whatever he thinks is right no matter what the consequences! - i.e. the sharing of his room! This is great, and I look forward to reading the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Yanic on January 08, 2006
    I was so excited to see an update on this story. it's easily one of the most unique stories about LOTR and I love the fact that you've given us a new perspective on Gamling. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Juliette on January 08, 2006
    Great update Zee! I am pleased to hear that Eomer is finally going to be getting his fine ass home--politics be damned, he needs to get back to Rohan and take some of the burden off Gamling, Aefre, and the rest of the survivors/returnees. Very good job of describing the state of Rohan after the War, and how desperately they are going to need aid. Gondor better be damn generous after what Rohan sacrificed! But I don't think we'll have to worry with Aragorn and Faramir in charge. And I'm sure Imrahil will be eager to kick in his share, since a certain daughter of his looks to be making Rohan her permanent abode soon.

    Gamling and Aefre were great as always. Gamling trying to sneak out her room unobtrusively the morning after and getting caught by those maids was very funny. Also liked the way Aefre stuck up for Eadingnes, and Eadignes' story about how the old healer's husband used to come to Blue Whale just for someone to talk to. I take it the wife did most of the talking in that marriage. Glad to hear that there *will* be wedding, and the kind Captain Jack and I both like, with drinks all around!

    You are working on an Eomer/Lothiriel fic? That is so cool! I love E/L fics, especially if it's going to be set in this universe. I hope you post it here, if not, please let me know where you do post it so I can read it.
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  • From ANON - Pandorag on January 08, 2006
    Sorry i didn't comment last chapter. I liked it though but this one moved the story a bit more. Boy, does she have a head on her shoulder, what a character and i'm starting to like Eadignes more and more. i am still on the lookout for the following chapters and i can't wait. Thanks.
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  • From Solaris on January 08, 2006
    Another well done chapter, Zee.
    I can't wait till the next chapter is posted.
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  • From ANON - Nakhti on January 03, 2006
    Hey Zee, hope you had a good christmas and new year, but i also hope you used your time productively to write the next installment of your amazing story! I thought we might get it as a little christmas pressie, but ive been checking my stocking every day and nothing has turned up yet- have i been a naughty girl this year? (Oh dear... maybe not the best question to ask!)
    Please make my new year and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Juliette on December 13, 2005
    Aw, does Willan like Eadignes? That's so cute! I hope very much that she succeeds in her goal to become a healer, though it doesn't look like it's going to be easy.

    Gamling and Aefre were wonderful as usual. Of course we'd rather read about them than about a bunch of elves!

    Percoset makes you horny? You lucky thing. It puts me right to sleep!

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  • From ANON - twodiffsocks on December 11, 2005
    this is a wonderful full, generous, funny, full of life story. i'm only on chapter 11 but i'm loving it. i agree with the others, its an adult story. keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - cyn on December 08, 2005
    oh this is a great story! I check for updates every day. thanx so much for writing it.
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  • From ANON - Nakhti on November 17, 2005
    Sorry I havent checked in for a while, but ive been keeping up with this story and i am just as much in love with it now as i was at the beginning. Another wonderful chapter, full of warmth and character and humour and SMUT! IN fact I liked this one even better than their first romp in the tent, i think because of your ability to blend the lyrical with the comical, humour with sensuousness- not to mention your flair for timing!
    I'm so impressed that this is actually being read by Bruce himself, and of course he's enjoying it- it would be impossible not to! You deserve every accolade for this work, which never fails to delight me. I am green with envy ;)
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